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Post by EHeroAndrew on Jan 26, 2014 23:25:03 GMT -5
Hey guys! This is my own webcomic! It's a Christian superhero story. The link is here: www.kingofjustice.comI update new pages whenever I can, so make sure to check it out everyday! Also, some feedback would be nice! Good or Bad feedback, I'll take it! |
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Post by Sam Whitfield on Jan 26, 2014 23:39:11 GMT -5
I I have been reading the series for a while now! I really like the plot so far but some of the villains seem to be painfully straightforward. For instance the homosexual villain in the series comes off as a little cheesy. It's almost like he knows what he's doing is wrong but he's doing it anyway! Maybe that's your intent, but I think it would be more interesting if some of the villains had moral crossroads where they were internally conflicted and might change for the better in the story. Great Work so far! Just wanted to make that recommendation.
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Post by EHeroAndrew on Jan 27, 2014 23:31:41 GMT -5
I I have been reading the series for a while now! I really like the plot so far but some of the villains seem to be painfully straightforward. For instance the homosexual villain in the series comes off as a little cheesy. It's almost like he knows what he's doing is wrong but he's doing it anyway! Maybe that's your intent, but I think it would be more interesting if some of the villains had moral crossroads where they were internally conflicted and might change for the better in the story. Great Work so far! Just wanted to make that recommendation. What made you think the mohawk guy was a homosexual? He's an anarchist. |
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